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January 17, 2010
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I witness the rain coming down
But it doesn't caress my face
I no longer feel your arms
As I'm wrapped in your embrace

I know the path is ahead of me
My feet don't touch the ground
I can't dance to the music
Because I don't hear any sound

I want to take flight without wings
Hear you call but it's not my name
I want to play this thing called life
But I don't understand the game

I know the sun is rising in the sky
My world is becoming black
I know you are trying to help
I merely experience you attack

I perceive the follower's gaze
But no one's watching me
I assume the abandoned kiss
Yet you hold me fearfully

All of my productive thoughts ricochet
I feel pain like the end in near
Why do I aquire these illusions,
When I have nothing to fear?
This one took me a week to finish. I couldn't get the words right for awhile. I actually love the way this one turned out. I hope you all enjoy it and comments and favs are welcome. :hug:
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EverlastingMemoirs Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Very interesting. A lovely poem, I think. ^^
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Vampiric-Time-Lord Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you
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amzly Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2010
thats pretty cool, i was suprised when i saw it only had 4 faves!
Make that 5 now :)
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Gothicangel93 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010   Writer
I definitely enjoyed it :) it was awesome
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Vampiric-Time-Lord Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ;p
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Gothicangel93 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010   Writer
you're welcome
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