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Don't try to hide
From what you can't ignore
If you close your eyes
You better be sure
It's not worth your time
Unless you find a cure
Just try to look inside
Take your final tour

Walk down the halls
Remember what you see
You say you got it all
But you're without me
Rejection against your wall
I only feel the sting
On the floor I crawl
As you walk out and leave
I was actually improv singing and came up with these words so I wrote it down
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0Demonic-Angel0 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Improv singing, eh? This is interesting. The sting of rejection... I can relate, like most I think.
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armymanski Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Great poem! Rejection is something everyone faces in their life at some point.
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becky-xx Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2010
Aww, once again i can relate to your work! For improvisation, it's awesome :D
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