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Waiting on a wooden bridge
Standing under the moon
You said you would meet me
And you better be here soon

The rain is falling softly
But it won't disguise my tears
I need you to take me away
Please make it quick, my dear

Cover me in your black cloak
And lay me down to sleep
I'll lose my thoughts and torment
But my restless soul I'll keep

Kiss my lips softly
Until I become cold and pale
Just awaken me sweetly
From this place that I call hell

Now I see you approaching
A dark figure out of the mist
Your scythe sits on your shoulder
It's a sight I can't resist

As you walk ever closer
I see your distorted face
I'm screaming inside with agony
While I crave your dark embrace

Suddenly you're next to me
And then I feel the pain
My red blood surrounds us
After you pull out the blade

This isn't like I thought it would be
It's all come out so wrong
I dreamt up an illusion
Some imaginary song

Then I close my eyes
And fall into the burning fire
Yet, for some reason
You still fill me with desire
This is one of my favs that I have written. It took me so long to write but it was definintly worth it.
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poet-laurie Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2010   Writer
this is awesome...i love it
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bethaney107 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010
i agree it is great! one of my faves
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indigoblueshine Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010   Traditional Artist
WOW, I love the chaotic emotions! You did great on describing feeling one emotion and another all at once. Usually there's not many people who can convey that kind of emotional duality, but you did a wonderful job. I love love love how even though you (or the character of the poem) fears what's going to happen, they still desire it and don't know why. That, to me, gives the poem a more human feel to it. Because mankind is complex like that. =)
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Vampiric-Time-Lord Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much ;p
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Adimbo Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
This is great I am trying to look for inspiration on writing horror poems and this is really good :) could you give me some feedback.
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Vampiric-Time-Lord Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much. What I usually try to convey in horror poems is emotion. If there is no true emotion, it is not a true poem. If you need topics, here are a few: death, blood, silence, alone, sadness, anger, loss of a loved one, supernatural beings, the moon. I hope this helps.
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Adimbo Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
haha thanks you should have a look at some of my poems there quite sick,sad and cool i think :)
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010  Professional Writer
Excellent Lyric, wonderful to read... :w00t:
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Lex-Logan Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Great work your are a very talented song writer :love:
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WanderingMercenary Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! This is great! Excellent work! :omg:
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